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13 October 2008 @ 12:51 am
Caravan  
Title: Caravan
Author: [info]saturn_necklace/[info]stormy_words
Pairing: Ohno/Nino
Word count: 1,073
Rating: PG
Genre: Mild angst.
Warnings: British English, if you don't get something, thats probably why; just ask or google it.
Summary: Ohno and Nino are staying in a caravan, in a storm. They have a fight and Ohno walks out, angry.

Rain pounded against the caravan roof, the metallic sound of water hammering against the vehicle seemed deafening to Nino as he sat on the small bed. The view through the window was obscured by raindrops weaving their way down the glass - not that Nino thought he would be able to see much through the cascades of rain anyway, had the window been able to repel water.

He hadn’t moved in about two hours; the half finished cup of tea next to him had gone cold long before, and Nino showed no sign of making any attempt to drink it, let alone reheat it.

This, Nino thought, wasn’t supposed to be how he spent his holiday. He was meant to be having fun, just generally being happy; not sitting alone on their bed, replaying their argument in his head so many times that he thought he would never forget a single detail. The expression on Ohno’s face as he turned to leave - one of pure anger - was etched into Nino’s mind.

Ohno had grabbed his fishing equipment and left without another word; Nino wondered if he was alright. The rain was heavy and unrelenting, and the thought of Ohno stuck out on the lake in a storm - in danger - wasn’t one that appealed to Nino; truthfully, he was afraid.

As if to spite him, a bolt of lightning crackled in the sky, illuminating the room for a split second - substituting for the sunlight that had been hidden by foreboding black clouds. Soon after, thunder gave it’s predatory roar and Nino decided that someone up there must really hate him - maybe Grandma Ninomiya, she’d always seemed to hold something against him.

Honestly, Nino wasn’t sure what the fight had been about; he could remember every word in excruciating detail, but the argument had been so petty and nonsensical that he didn’t know what either of them had been trying to prove.

He watched two raindrops racing each other down the window, only to join midway, merging into one to finish the course together; Nino thought that it would be nice if he and Ohno could merge together again like that, as they had so many times before - he was doubtful though, as much as he would love amazing make-up-sex, the look Ohno had given him made him unsure about any thoughts of reconciliation.

The consistent sound of rain on the roof abruptly changed to the forceful sound of hail clattering against the metal - the paint work would probably be chipped tomorrow, knowing Nino’s current luck - and Nino’s worry returned.

‘Grandma Ninomiya,’ he thought, eyes closed in silent prayer, ‘If you’re up there, I’m sorry. I didn’t mean to put your cat in the bath when I was seven - well I did, but I didn’t realise that she would be quite so bad at swimming. Anyway, I’d really appreciate it if you could try not to kill Ohno. Thanks’

Nino opened his eyes to another flash of lightning. ‘I’m going insane. I’m praying to my dead grandmother.’ He let his head drop back against the caravan wall, then repeated the motion a couple more times for good measure - he was vaguely hoping that it would bring his sanity back.

He looked towards the door and sighed; no matter how many times he looked, a dripping Ohno didn’t appear in the doorway, a huge grin on his face as he held up his catch of the day for Nino to see.

Nino supposed that he could always go and look for Ohno, but he wasn’t sure that it would be entirely appreciated; Ohno had always liked being alone, particularly when he was angry - for any chance of reconciliation, Nino would have to let him calm down.

As time went on, Nino began to get tired - after a few more hours he was barely able to keep his eyes open, let alone stifle his yawns. A glance at the clock informed him in obnoxious, red flashing numbers that it was well past two in the morning.

Finally, he moved. The tea was in his way, and he really needed to just lie down and sleep. The cold drink was soon safely placed on the floor next to the bed, and all Nino could do was let his body flop down onto the bed, drained of all energy.

The moment his head hit the pillow he was asleep, the sheets remaining in a tangled mess beneath him and the blanket haphazardly twisted around his legs. It was a dreamless sleep - probably a good thing, considering the state of Nino’s mind; any dreams he’d had would most likely have been unpleasant to say the least.

It was about four in the morning when Ohno returned; Nino lay in the same position, deep in sleep, and Ohno’s expression softened as he saw the other. He put away his fishing gear as quietly as possible, leaving a trail of water droplets behind him; the rain hadn’t let up and Ohno was completely soaked, hair plastered to his face and clothes clinging to his skin with every move he made.

He peeled off his clothes slowly and carefully, not wanting to wake Nino - he was feeling bad about the argument, as he had been since his anger faded away around an hour after the fight - he hung his clothes on the hooks next to the caravan door, leaving them to drip dry as he searched for a towel.

His hair stuck out at odd angles - a towel dried style - as he rubbed warmth into his clammy skin, drying himself as well as possible before slipping on a pair of boxers and a shirt.

The dip of the bed as Ohno lay down was what woke Nino. He stared at Ohno with an expression of concern, pain and regret. Ohno untangled the blanket from Nino’s legs and carefully draped it over them.
“I’m sorry. I love you. Go back to sleep.”

An expression of relief washed over Nino’s face as Ohno’s arm wound around his waist.
“Did you catch anything?”
“No. Go back to sleep.”
“I love you.”
“I know. Go back to sleep.”

Nino laughed and rolled onto his side to face Ohno.
“What if I’m not tired anymore?”
“You are.” Ohno assured him with a smile, pulling Nino closer. “Go back to sleep.”

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I felt like destroying something beautiful: Ryo - very danger![info]silentchord on October 13th, 2008 12:16 am (UTC)
The atmosphere and setting really reminds me of the crappy times I got dragged to Great Yarmouth to stay in a caravan haha~ Typical British caravan holiday aye? Anyway, lovely little fic. Really enjoyed it :D
OHNO = Brit slang + water everywhere: Aiba + Dog[info]saturn_necklace on October 13th, 2008 03:29 pm (UTC)
I have to say, despite being British, I've never actually stayed in a caravan in England. Usually we go for tents, which is worse XD!

I'm glad you liked it anyway :D!
i_am_zan[info]i_am_zan on October 13th, 2008 01:04 am (UTC)
rain fic I love rain fics ..OhMiya rainfics are superspecial and yaaay for British spelling!
OHNO = Brit slang + water everywhere: Ohmiya[info]saturn_necklace on October 13th, 2008 03:31 pm (UTC)
I can never bring myself to use American words, they always just sound so wrong to me when I try to use them, so I just don't anymore XD;;

I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Katie: Ohmiya: Candy[info]hontowa on October 13th, 2008 02:08 am (UTC)
I too am a lover of Ohmiya rainfics :3 This was a cute little moment of angsty fluff, nice read :)
OHNO = Brit slang + water everywhere: Ohno + drink[info]saturn_necklace on October 13th, 2008 03:32 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it :D!
[info]kattrin_kun on October 13th, 2008 02:49 am (UTC)
Awww, this was really cute. I really love how Ohmiya can just make up with the simplest of things.

Great fic!
OHNO = Brit slang + water everywhere: Nino colour[info]saturn_necklace on October 13th, 2008 03:32 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you enjoyed it :D
god damn these electric sex pants: arashi: aiba is a hottie![info]nicefinalbeam on October 13th, 2008 03:08 am (UTC)
That's the kind of fight I can recognize. One that gets resolved simply by caring for one another. I really liked this, thanks for sharing.
OHNO = Brit slang + water everywhere: armed and dangerous[info]saturn_necklace on October 13th, 2008 03:33 pm (UTC)
I'm glad that you liked it :D. When I was writing I thought it would be good to have something different, where the argument doesn't even matter in the end :)
i am the question to all the answers: 大宮 → ラブラブ[info]maiaide on October 13th, 2008 04:37 am (UTC)
I almost with it was longer! (Ahem make-up sex?) I was curious about the fight but then in the end it didn't really matter what it was about. I really enjoyed it. :)
OHNO = Brit slang + water everywhere: armed and dangerous[info]saturn_necklace on October 13th, 2008 03:38 pm (UTC)
I would've made it longer, if it hadn't taken far too long to write this much and if it hadn't just felt like it was finished. (I've only had one attempt at writing porn, and I'm not sure if I'm quite ready for another XD; They take far too long for me to write)

With the fight It just seemed like there was no real need to go into it in the end. There was also the fact that I had no idea what to make it be about XD

I'm glad you enjoyed it anyway :D
[info]evolardnek on October 13th, 2008 05:41 am (UTC)
why does this make me wish for it to rain super hard here! :D Nino is stubborn but he cares and so does Ohno i'm happy with the way you got that across in the story even when they are mad at each other they still care...with make up sex XD

the ending made me smile Thanks ^__^b
OHNO = Brit slang + water everywhere: Ohmiya kiss[info]saturn_necklace on October 13th, 2008 03:40 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it, somehow the whole concept just came out after I started writing, and I figured that it would be good to have something different where the fight ends up meaningless in the end, rather than them needing to go into it and resolve things.
Kyon: ohmiya-[thoughts][info]dthnhi on October 13th, 2008 02:09 pm (UTC)
Gyah, thank you for that ending. Now there is no need to wonder whatever they could've fought about.
kyah! \o/ THAT WAS PLEASANT TO READ. Thank you for sharing!
OHNO = Brit slang + water everywhere: Ohno + ties[info]saturn_necklace on October 13th, 2008 03:41 pm (UTC)
I thought it would be nice to have something like that, where in the end, the argument just doesn't matter anymore.

I'm glad you liked it :D
Starr[info]everystarrfall on October 13th, 2008 06:23 pm (UTC)
Squeeeeeeeeee, I love this. It's so cute. And sweet. And I also happen to lovelovelove rain, so ♥s all around. :D

Not that this piece in particular needed to be any longer (although I never say no to make up sex scenes, -COUGH- =P), you've made me crave more fic despite that I really don't have the time to be reading any others right now.
OHNO = Brit slang + water everywhere: Satoshi[info]saturn_necklace on October 13th, 2008 11:26 pm (UTC)
XD everyone seems to have a thing for rain. I'm glad you like it though :D!

(My problem with the porn, is that I rarely actually finish it. I think I still have like, three half written porn fics somewhere on my computer which I don't know whether I'll ever finish or not XD;;). S-sorry for giving you fic cravings? XD;;

I probably don't really have the time to be writing at the moment, but I am. Very slowly XD;!
Beckiii[info]demonic_crayons on October 13th, 2008 08:44 pm (UTC)
Great fic! ^___^ Ithought it was just the right length. Short and sweet.

xD This made me think of when i would get dragged down to Devon for a week in a freezing caravan with my cousin. It RAINED NON-STOP But i was seven and didn't care xD
OHNO = Brit slang + water everywhere: Ohmiya[info]saturn_necklace on October 13th, 2008 11:29 pm (UTC)
I don't think I could've made it much longer if I tried unless I attempted to actually put the make-up sex in and it just kind of seemed finished there anyway, so I'm glad it worked that way :D!

Surprisingly, I've never been caravanning in England before. For some reason, my family are crazy and decide that if we're going to do the whole camping thing which admittedly doesn't happen often we're going to do it properly. In a tent. XD;; ...I have stayed in a caravan in France though, even if I'm not entirely sure why XD.
Mitan/Litany: old times[info]litany_sh on October 13th, 2008 11:30 pm (UTC)
This was just really sweet, gave me so many warm feelings. Thanks for writing!
OHNO = Brit slang + water everywhere: Jun step and Go[info]saturn_necklace on October 13th, 2008 11:37 pm (UTC)
I'm glad you liked it :D!
mort[info]panthera_mort on October 16th, 2008 10:05 pm (UTC)
aww sweet.
i love sleeping ohmiya.
somehow the picture of them cuddled up against each other is so clear in my head
*mind replays 'ohno caught in nino's futon'*
:DD
Zheinpathos: squishy ohmiya[info]zheinpathos on October 18th, 2008 11:15 am (UTC)
awwww *huggles Oh-chan and Nino*

<33333333
Audrey: She smiled at me[info]stormytwilight on October 19th, 2008 06:51 am (UTC)
Wow. It's so nice and sweet. :D
..*~*dRagOnEtTe*~*...[info]clarice_dragon on February 25th, 2009 05:28 am (UTC)
i like how u managed to tell a story revolving around an argument without writing in the actual argument
night_inscriber[info]night_inscriber on May 24th, 2009 08:24 pm (UTC)
I liked it; it depicted a normal argument/ make-up situation. Ohmiya is the best couple to use in any situation. Thank you for sharing.
[info]asiangreencake on June 29th, 2009 01:38 am (UTC)
i luv it how ohno keeps telling nino to go back to sleep!! >_< lol
ggumilgeoya[info]ggumilgeoya on April 9th, 2011 07:31 pm (UTC)
wow. Just, I loved it. Their love really seems special.
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